|Reviews for Water|
| Cinderblock chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
Interesting. I liked the imagry. And at the same time, I liked how ambiguous it was. Leaving the reader to thier imagination to figure out what it is about.
| Jellimiah chapter 1 . 3/11/2005
this is pretty, but it is very very vague, and therefore not especially moving. some concrete images would help a lot. nice work with the language, though.