Reviews for Because of You
Haunted-dreams05 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Wow... powerful poem. Very angsty and dark. I can relate pretty well to this. Very nicely written.
putz-6 chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
This is an awsome poem _
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Verse 2 was kickin' I love it!

X Here we go again lol X

Thanks once
blackrosestears chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
It's a nice piece of work. My only complaint, some of the words feel like they're being forced into the song. Other than that, I really like some phrases that you're saying like..."Because of you I cry every night for the same thing/ Because of you I never let anyone else in/ Because of you I’m ashamed of myself/ Because of you I’m broken/" I think that verse is really pretty. Contunie with the good work! :)
Kenesis X chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Can relate to this one too...

I like your Song Format its really cool as a muscian i can hear then music behind your beutiful words! Amazing piece !
Silly Little Storywriter chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
Fab! Another MCR lover! I love your work. Magic. Keep it up.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
This is really beautiful. Great lyrics. I can really relate to this piece. Good job. QueenVixta
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
touching...sad, depressing but yet so beautiful. I'm so sorry for what this guy has done for you. I love the flowing and the words you use in such perfection.
twistedtruths chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Loved that so much. I know the feeling all to well, especially the third verse. You did an awesome job with this.