Reviews for Lost
falling on deaf ears chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
i love it.

great use of imagery... lovely word choice, as well. it even sounds nice out loud.
TheUnadulteratedCat chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
Your reference to curing the world of fear, uncertainty and hurt is inspiring to all. I know how it is with titles-in-the-making. _ Well done with this!
indigo symphony chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
Great imagery, and truth here. I suppose the wording may be a bit rough, but it works with this piece. There aren't many people who can make that work, but I think you're one of them. Everything's laid out before your reader, even if they don't know you. And...I know what you mean.

Yes- playing in the park sounds awesome! Let's!
Called Chaos chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
The fact you take so long between updates is a fact that can be forgiven because everything you write here is honest and crystal-clear. It's... good. Even if the language wasn't artful, it would be good for the sheer feeling of it. Good job, Arya.