|Reviews for Gone for now|
| youzi chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
the ending line really caught my eye.. liked how you built this piece up. keep writing D
| ode to a firefly chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
I'm feeling pretty much the same way. I'm fed up with school, teachers, and half of my friends. I just would like to sit at home all alone playing guitar for about 5 days. Maybe then return to "real life."
Overall, this is a great poem with good description. :)
| Kaywyn chapter 1 . 4/23/2005
you seem to know right where to repeat in this one...very very nice...and I forgot to say in nights and hallways I like the emphisis with the "and blood trickled..." just wanted top let you know that...
| aknightsgoldenrose chapter 1 . 4/16/2005
Nice poem. I really liked the last line.
| mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 4/12/2005
aw... life is but one big adventure isn't it? cute poem
| MaskedMarionette chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
me likey... er... i like the flow
| Freddie of Albion chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Very descriptive. A powerful done!