Reviews for Sometimes
RedneckWoman chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
I know what that is due to I have that someone who changes everything. It struck home. Thank you for writing this.
Dolenquarion chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
I really like this. You've got such a positive outlook on life its inspiring. I know of a few person's like that. Always good to have friends like that. Keep it up.

Just one minor comment, u might wanna change the play guitar to something diff. "Play guitar" sounds a bit funny.
A death angel chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
i really like your poem. It's very deep and true.