Reviews for Undone
godsgurl chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
i love how every the first line of every stanza was the same. Really awesome, i love how you compared your broken heart to shattered glass. i really love it.
queenvixta chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Hey, this is really good. The flow is great, the wording is original and the rhyming scheme is amazing. Good job! QueenVixta
EWindheim chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
wow. This is really heartbreaking and angsty. I really liked this stanza:"I’ve come undoneYou ripped me apartI hope you cut yourselfOn the sharp piecesOf my broken heart"Very descriptive.~Hawke
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
who...very well written. loved it!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
wow very powerful & well written.. i love the stanza you repeated.. its brilliant
AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
OMG...i have to say i love this poem i know how it is when stuff like this happens...but this is very well written and for me every single one of ur poems get better and better everytime and i love them all...well this is very good...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
This is a good poem. I like the repitition, and the way you capture feeling. It makes me feel as if i were the one coming undone.