Reviews for First Heartbreak
mizerable-girl chapter 1 . 4/8/2005
it's a great poem. when it comes to love, and things don't usually go your way, people should be optimistic that the man of their dreams would one day sweep them of their feet. and that goes for the men too, the perfect women for you guys are just waiting for you. ... sorry if i'm babling here... it really is a great pom and very realistic
fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
great job!..i hate love. it sucks. nothing ever works out.

keep writin (dunno y u'd stop!)

xHannahx chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
its weird how you can connect with someone you've never met so well. this is really nice, sort of older-sister-ish. cool idea,

MorbidTruth chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
I like it! I hope myno likes it too..She deserves happiness..more than most people.

Anyway, keep up the good work.
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Not your best, but it has a sweet message. I know just what you mean. Sure Myno will like it! Liked, what ever.

RatherFresh chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
so nice.. i feel weepy. (i just dumped so i'm super emotional at the moment..) great job. i love it.
skyblue-rocks chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
whoa. very pretty. nice job! keep up your work
Anna178 chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
This is really beautiful. Whoever its aimed at is lucky to have such kind well-spoken words. Again your talent astounds me.

THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
realistic and true. great job.
Biene chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
omg...i know myno...and her story is so sad *sniffs* wut ur doing is really awesome. gr8 poem.
Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
This is so beautiful! I really love the fact that you wrote that to her, it's really sweet!

Much love, Rosanna.
myno chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
beautiful poem, especially the ending. Thanks so much... this means a lot to me.
breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
That's so sweet, and a great advice. Keep on going!
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Very sad. I can relate, being helpless in a situation... thats what I think it's about, please correct me if I am wrong... _
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
shit. deep and sad! wow. awesome though, really. awesome. write on.
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