|Reviews for Suriah|
| Yemaya chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
I didn't like the last half of this story. The first half was promising, with Angel, the bed-time stories and the beautifully described appearance of the fairy.
I think it went down hill after that. The ending esspecially seemed rushed. There is no decent explaination as to what the girl did that made Suriah want to punch her. And her welcome home seemed to be too cliche, do all children with amazing powers have abusive fathers? The ending I thought, was a let down, to a good story that started beautifully. I think you could have done a lot better with this.
| The Sleepy Poet chapter 1 . 3/12/2005
Wow, that's amazing how you turned her 'perfect plan' into a catastrophe...And I love how you make short stories that have meaning...WRITE ON ,