Reviews for Everyman And The Undiscovered Country |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have absolutely no idea how to put this... but this story was so amazingly powerful in so few words. I finished reading it and turned around to talk to someone and they asked me, "Oh my God, what's wrong!" Apparently I looked like I was on the verge of tears. Just... the moment of the protagonist's death... I envy your amazing word economy. btw, congrats on the scholarship! ::breathtaking:: |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::big, sappy grin:: You have no idea how much I'm liking this story! It's just giving me this completely... comforted feeling. Like the main character's... contentedness?... is rubbing off on me. You have portrayed, by far, my favorite view of dying. I'm not entirely sure how I can describe how taken I am with it. Well, I'm in school and the bell just rang (they're shooing me away from the computers) but... Thank you for this! I'm gonna be reading more as soon as I can. My cousin is at my house, so I've been forbidden to go on the internet while I should be entertaining her. So... a bientot :)db |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D now THAT is the way to hook an audience. ::grimaces at the fact that he hasn't thought seriously about reading/writing in about two months:: I am definitely going to be reading on very soon... I have to shove off to a little birthday soirée right now, but expect more reviews in the not-too-distant future! ew. daylight's savings time... britain doesn't have that, because gb knows that it's utterly RIDICULOUS to have to shove time forward an hour to get more sunlight. well, needless to say, i'm officially getting 2-5 hours of sleep every night next week... i absolutely cannot wait until i get the chance to read more though! wow. that new rating system threw me off ::twitchtwitch:: anyway good to read your stuff again :)rm |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I didn't expect that. It didn't seem like he was dying, that's the point though, right? The ending wasn't confusing like I guess it could have been. You pulled it off well while not being direct. Of course you got the English Scolarship, congradulations. Where are you going? |
![]() ![]() ![]() woot! I'm back. He's not talking about climbing that mountain is he? He must really want to die to scale that thing so soon. I mean, what godess is going to choose to live on an easily reachable peak? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry it's taken me so long to come back, not for your sake, for mine. I wish I could read it NOW. We have this thing called Espaniolandia tonight, no english permitted "country". It's going to be.. interesting. I don't want to go, my dictionary isn't small enough to hide from the customs employees. This sounds really interesting. A bit of repetition for you: I like your character. I like the idea of his past.. uh-oh. I have to leave.. now, it seems. Time to try out my pantomiming skills. I'm going to read this the second I get back. As soon as I can ditch the policia and get across the "border" that is. Screwy language laws. I'll just tell them I have drugs and get myself arrested. bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to read the rest, I like your character, but I'll have to read it later. I'll be back when I finish work. |