wow, that is just cruel.

I really liked this first chapter, so I wonder where I can get the book because I'd like to read the whole story :)

No way...im late for reading it here...alot.
Shame..i really loved the 1st chap.
i want to read ...i cant get the published one...so what should i do?... .

NO. SHOOT. I WAS TOO LATE.

Omg i really need to read this story what do i do? :(

Well done. I like that I could picture things but you weren't pushing for visuals. It flows quite well.

You really should announce it here if Defenses gets published. I would just love to buy it!

Reminds me of a one-night stand...

OMG. I'M DYING HERE. AWESOME FIC RIGHT THERE. WHY IS IT GONE?! D: TELL ME WHERE TO BUY THE BOOK. D:

I'm sad to see it go, but do let me know if it gets published. I might want to buy a copy!

Congratulations! I can't remember if I left a review for the last chapter, but this is great news! I was really looking forward to having "Defenses" in print, and now it's happening! :D Can I ask to know what name you will be publishing as so I can snap up the books you wring out?

Hi there.

While i'm sad to hear that you'renplanning on disappearing, in a way, from fictionpress. If the reason is that you wish to try to get your stuff published i thnk that's a great reason to do so. However. Until you've decided what to do i wouldn't take recommend you to take your account down, nor your stories. I do find them far too valuable for that. I truly find it sad that this story has come to an end. I do suppose it's fair enough. But still sad to watching some as good as this go.

So all i can really say is thank you for providing us witch such a good and intense story, despite there actually not be any "lemon" as some might have requested. I still loved it.

I still hope that we one day will be able to read more work from you

/Kajskk

PM me your info! I really love this story. :)

I hope you get published! Although it has been a tremulous journey waiting anxiously for the next installment every single time, I'm glad I got to see it through the end. Your Sapphic writing is very much appreciated. :) Loved this story but I don't think I can handle reading it again. Too heart wrenching lol. Maybe one day when it's in print... ;)

Hi I love this story I have read the original one and this new version and I was wondering whether you intend to write a sequel to this story.