Reviews for Run |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I'm serious I just read the whole thing and it was awesome! I find it really hard to read a fic online cuz it's hard to hold my attention. But dude, honestly keep going. very nice u! HEc |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! No! She can't die! Don't let her die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa! That was so cruel! I really hope she doesn't die! THAT STUPID LEDORF! Why in the heck would they have shot her like that just for money that she owed! I'm not sure how much 861,889 Euros is, but I know it's an AWFUL LOT! I think it's quite a bit more than that many dollars! BUT LEDORF IS GOIN' DOWN! UR, somebody's gotta teach him who's boss! GREAT CHAPTER by the way! _ Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() Hey Im really enjoying ur story. Its really good. You put just enough of detail in your story to keep me interested. Well update soon. *Bunny* |
![]() ![]() hey...i think this story is off to a great start please please write more...like i said u are very descriptive and as i read stuff like this it makes it more interesting to feel like u are watching a movie in ur mind because it is so descriptive...well it was good! |
![]() ![]() too lazy to sign in... well you are never online Lintu! GET ONLINE MORE! We miss ya here! Nice job with this one! hope to see ya soon (if you ever come back...) and yea... er somethin...CYA!-biss |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! You're welcome, BlackFeatherLintu, I really like this story, it's got great detail and it's very well written! I can imagine everything in my head, and I really like that! _ And the chapter name really goes well with the contents of this chapter! That guy, Ledorf, really seems like a dragon, don't he? I can tell he's pretty dangerous and wild, he ain't someone I'd be comfortable around! NO WAY! _ Anyway, I love how the endings of the chapters keep you aching for the next one, it's very classic! Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to chapter 3! _~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of course, I'll review you! _ Always review, it's the courteous and the best thing to do after reading something! _~ This story is already sounding WAY cool, and I can't wait to see what happens next! I know it'll be awesome! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely start. Keep going, I love it! |