Reviews for HeartHolding Palm
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Good EMOtion Mallory, but some of the rythme is odd...
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
TheFlameofSilver chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
I liked the desriptions and metaphors in this, but I think the rhyming and the overall flow of the poem needs work. I enjoyed it nonetheless
TheAngelofhope chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
It was rather good. Nice job.