Reviews for as it is now
banal chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
beautifully written. the use of language makes it almost tangible... like you can taste the feeling of being so intertwined with someone else. one that has to be read more than once though, to catch all the detail. i had to read it twice, anyway.

lovely piece of writing.
acid-tears chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
I love your imagery and metaphors. Very beautiful, with an other-worldly feel. Going on my favourites list :D