|Reviews for Breaking Up!|
| emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
I know who this is written about and i think it's really weird that i never reviewed this one esp as it was me that was advising you in that direction, i'm sorry. I think we both know though that that was the best decision you ever made. No1 should go through what he put you through mentally especially someone as special as you
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
this is good, but it leaves much to be answered, like what other things were putting pressure on the relationship.
| Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
wow, the last line is the best, i can really really relate to this, in my opinion i think you should just do what makes you happy, even if breaking up would make you sad to begin with... well, i always think in terms of "what'll it be like in then long run?" like the pain will fade in time. anyway, i saw two ers but no big deal - "a lone" - isn't that two words? and "people have sad", apart from this i love the poem x weasel within x
| Angel Underneath chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
this is good, i like... recently broke up with my boyfriend a few days ago so this is kinda enlightening!
| Infection chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
you're a very talented writer... i also, loved the last two lines, esp. the ending...a superb, and emmotional
| 24 days of iceCold chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
man girl u got talent don't let anyone tell u diffrent
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
aw, i hope everything turns out betta for you...asap
newayz, i love the last wo lines, esp. the ending...
| Tears of IceFire chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
wow. I like it alot. Itz really powerful-I can feel the depth of it...
| GirlNamedLiv chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
yeah i just went through a breakup so i kno how thats gotta feel like, cept i dont cut. good poem.
| dragonsdream13 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
i went through the same thing a few days ago... except i ended up actually breaking up with the person. great job.-DragonsDream
| Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
If someone is hurting you then get out, no one needs someone else hurting them on top of everything. But if its real love then you should tell him/her this and deal with it them.
Raw emotion is coming from this poem, very powerful.
Keep it up.
| Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Wonderful work like always. If the person is screwing you up that bad, dump his or her ass and start all over again. I wrote a new poem that might help you out. It's called "The Price". Hope to hear from you soon.
| angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
nice poem for reading! i liked all the effects your volcabuary had on it..
| Broken Melody chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Interesting yet pretty or so pretty!
| peaceman4ever chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
wow, tihs is ONE VERY EMOTIONAL POEM.