Reviews for Breaking Up!
emilyrachel18 chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
I know who this is written about and i think it's really weird that i never reviewed this one esp as it was me that was advising you in that direction, i'm sorry. I think we both know though that that was the best decision you ever made. No1 should go through what he put you through mentally especially someone as special as you
AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 4/5/2005
this is good, but it leaves much to be answered, like what other things were putting pressure on the relationship.

Lady Solitaire
Clap Clap Raise Your Hands chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
wow, the last line is the best, i can really really relate to this, in my opinion i think you should just do what makes you happy, even if breaking up would make you sad to begin with... well, i always think in terms of "what'll it be like in then long run?" like the pain will fade in time. anyway, i saw two ers but no big deal - "a lone" - isn't that two words? and "people have sad", apart from this i love the poem x weasel within x
Angel Underneath chapter 1 . 4/1/2005
this is good, i like... recently broke up with my boyfriend a few days ago so this is kinda enlightening!
Infection chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
you're a very talented writer... i also, loved the last two lines, esp. the ending...a superb, and emmotional
24 days of iceCold chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
man girl u got talent don't let anyone tell u diffrent
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
aw, i hope everything turns out betta for you...asap

newayz, i love the last wo lines, esp. the ending...

muchlUB-kerr
Tears of IceFire chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
wow. I like it alot. Itz really powerful-I can feel the depth of it...
GirlNamedLiv chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
yeah i just went through a breakup so i kno how thats gotta feel like, cept i dont cut. good poem.
dragonsdream13 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
i went through the same thing a few days ago... except i ended up actually breaking up with the person. great job.-DragonsDream
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
If someone is hurting you then get out, no one needs someone else hurting them on top of everything. But if its real love then you should tell him/her this and deal with it them.

Raw emotion is coming from this poem, very powerful.

Keep it up.
Lady DreamWriter chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Wonderful work like always. If the person is screwing you up that bad, dump his or her ass and start all over again. I wrote a new poem that might help you out. It's called "The Price". Hope to hear from you soon.
angel-of-woe chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
nice poem for reading! i liked all the effects your volcabuary had on it..
Broken Melody chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Interesting yet pretty or so pretty!
peaceman4ever chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
wow, tihs is ONE VERY EMOTIONAL POEM.
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