Reviews for In Distress |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for updating! haha... I'm really loving how it's coming along so far. I can't wait to find out why the dragon needs them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() And I had just about given up hope for continuation! _ It's really great, and Griffin's just amusing. _ Love the dragon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! I love it! Add some more soon, please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD I LIKE it! :) CD |
![]() ![]() Interesting story, I don't think I've seen another story like it . . . I was a little confused at the beginning, but I think I know what's happening now. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good story so far! you spelled eerie wrong BTW...just a little constructive criticism _~ be on the look out for my story in a few days...most likely titled Goddess of Death... |
![]() ![]() Cory's a nice person! Dragons are nice, just that they see things from a different angle. Humans are just plain silly. - I think Griffin is *not* human. Definitely not. The dwarves are a bit... unexpectly dwarfy. Really. They come over as dwarves, real life with all their little habits and whatnot. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's hard to find a good story on Fictionpress, but I'd definitly say that yours is a good one. You're characters are believable and your plot is very interesting. Also you don't have short, snippy chapters which is a huge bonus in my book. I'll definitly be back to read some more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() o, skink is funny. _- hope you'll continue soon, i love the way the story's coming out! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, nice chapter! I really like Cory and Skink...:) You have real skill...I'd love to see more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I like it! New twists and turns! I like Skink, he's cool. .~ Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I like Cory a lot. Of course, I like *all* dragons, so it is not really much a surprise, I guess. What is Griffon anyway? A gryphon? He strikes me as a particularly likable character. - Overall, the story is very gripping and very interesting. - I like it a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this story's awesome, and i love the dialogue and the way you describe things! please, PLEASE continue it! [and please do that continuum of revelations] _ loved it, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehehe, I really like this story. Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, awesome story so far V keep it up! ~kei rei |