Reviews for Hold Still
the.mad.hatter's.accomplice chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
i have this lump thing in my throat. i think it passed completely over my head, but i still loved it.
Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I don't really get it. I mean, I get some parts, but not the whole thing. A bit too poem-like for me to understand. But that's just me and my stupidity, so in general I think it is pretty good. I know it is, somehow. I hope I understand the why and wait part soon...
bookworm925 chapter 1 . 8/4/2007
aw... )

nice one!
Her Wishing Well chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
Beautiful and sad and entirely original. I loved it.
coolwhiprincess7 chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
wow this is really good. I love the repetition its placed perfectly. I also like the side details "Black hair. Darker than mine.". This reminds me of the live subjects i try to photograph, and the constant fidgeting. The ending is the best part"It was impossible to tell red from black" Nice job!
andrea chapter 1 . 4/13/2006
I seriously love this. Not sure why. Very unique. I had to read it twice to understand it completely though. Nice work
poet tree chapter 1 . 1/22/2006
Oh wow. Elegant and BEAUTIFUL. Dark and lovely and romantic. I love it.
xPRETTY.HATE.MACHiNEx chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
This was so good.
keep.breathing chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
This is so beautiful, and strange. I love it so much for reasons I don't know. To my favorites it's going that's for sure. Keep up the awesome work! ~Abigail
SexyGothyDiva chapter 1 . 3/14/2005
I really like this. It was almost poetical.