Reviews for Behind Broken Windows |
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![]() ![]() That was beautiful, i just know that i'll re read this story again after a few years, i'll never forget this story, thank you so much for writing this, i really love your work, its so beautiful as always... |
![]() ![]() Hi! This story may have been stolen and posted on AO3 as fanfiction. "Of Tattered Wings and Broken Promises" by SeunnieLove. /works/28064652/chapters/68755362 May have been, because I cannot be certain you are not the same authors. They claim Dirty-Angel-Toes is their pseudonym. They've also posted another story from this site by another author claiming it as their own work. I don't know if you'll see this, but in case you do and in case your story has indeed been stolen, I figured I'd inform you. |
![]() ![]() Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuute this was so freaking kyuuuuute. The last part tho, OMG that got me rolling. I LOVE JAKAE (KaedexJack 4eves) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hate all the overdramatic hipsters in this story but it's pretty funny. I see that it's very old. And I thought I was the only one with a super old fictionpress account from when I was a teenager. How do you feel about this story now that you're an adult? |
![]() ![]() I really like this story and I really want to like Jack, but people who blame everyone else but themselves, hurt people because they are hurt, are just weak. Way too narcissistic. But it does allow for lots of character development, eh? So I'll just keep my personal quirks out of it and enjoy this as it unfolds :D |
![]() ![]() Abso-friggin-lutely beautiful. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you made me cry you bastard ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I really really loved that story :D I've often wondered how you were going to end this story and the way you did it is just perfect :) (So sorry for my bad English :( I'm French and I better read English than write it) |
![]() ![]() ![]() On chapter five, and so far I continue to be intrigued! And poor Jack! As a fellow artist, I wouldn't have just said "oh, some of my art got wet." Yes he had much - MUCH - more pressing issues to attend to at the moment, but later I would have bawled my eyes out over having ONE sketch ruined, let alone several, or -Lord forbid - a finished piece. (Art rant... over). Anyway, love it so far, glad that it's finished so I can read it all and not have to wait. |
![]() ![]() so after feeling down because of your 'stupid post it notes' and yet totally absorbed with your style i decide to read something which is COMPLETED..and btw Jack is a narcissist? XDDDDDDDDDDDD my god you sure can do like any POV i mean just compare Seth and him! |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh I cried. I couldn't this truly was beautiful. It was amazing..for lack of a better word at the moment. Great, excellent job, truly. |
![]() ![]() Omg the suspense was killing me and he finally did it and im all relived and ahdkfhsldhf i can't this is tooooo goodxD |
![]() ![]() Amazing omg...so sad and heart wrenching but still very good. |
![]() ![]() You my friend. Are fucking amazing at writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emma's reaction made me think that she is such a bitch. This struck a personal chord so don't mind me as I rant. First: that relationship was over, so why does it matter to her? If he'd been with guys before, whats the problem with that? He's with her now and that was just another person, never mind gender. Third (or is this second?) She should feel privileged that he's telling her this - it shows a new intimacy in their relationship. 4th, he never said he was gay. If anything their set up suggests that he's bisexual. Is there really that big an issue with your partner having been with someone of the opposite sex? I get that its a big deal for her, but my opinion of Emma has just rapidly down plummeted. Ah, rant over. As a bisexual, this is some stuff I get a little sensitive on. Sorry x |