Reviews for Severance
fairEtales chapter 1 . 3/26/2006
Aww...This is so cute! I'm not sure, but is the reader supposed to make up their own ending about where and why the old guy was leaving? The whole time I thought he was dying! I really liked this...great work!
The Fourth Fate chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
WOAH. That's mind blowing. Your writing is amazing. I love it. I love how the little girl is like an angel or g-d or something and the old man is about to die. I also liked the reference to the "mistake" of him almost dying when he fell out of the tree. It's so sweet and beautiful. Bravo.
LinBean chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Very cute! I expected it to be dark about halfway through...and was surprised that you actually wrote this ending. HEHE!