Reviews for i dive into an ocean
Ivriniel chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
Sehr gelungene und ausdrucksstarke Bilder!
Munchin chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
this is good.. although I think your german poems are better. the topic is iinteresting.. we find out what you mean by the imagery by the end of the piece. good try
Sagaciouspnay chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
I think I dive in the ocean way too much...dreaming, of course. I like free verse and this poem was nice to read. Good job!
Eirien chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
An impressive poem, I like it very much. The image is well chosen and well expanded, I could almost see and experience the whole scene myself while reading it. The way the sounds fade into silence, the way one is emerged deeper and deeper in oneself/ one's dreams (or nightmares), and the shock moment when the realization comes that there is no way back, no escape, that the way out is not as easy as the way in - you have portrayed this convincingly and in powerful words. Great job.
karmakaze chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
Interesting. I know what you mean about being trapped in dreams. I like it:-)
RatherFresh chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
powerful. great job.