Wow this is really good! It reminded me of a story I once read along time ago but it's completely different. But they had that same it-could-have-ended-happily-if-someone-had-said-something kind of ending. I love this!

heycan you explain to me what happened in that last part. I kind of lost track of what was going on. It's really good.

Hi, *thanks for reviewing*, are you going to continue this? I thought it was nice and good! keep it up.

by the way I updated, found a chapter yay. Anyway update soon!

this is to be continued isn't it? enjoyed reading it. an excellent narrative.

the last part is confusing... what happened there? its good though