Reviews for Suddenly Slowly
lady scribe of avandell chapter 3 . 11/6/2005
you're keeping me interested, but i wanted to say: watch your verb tenses, you were jumping from past to present all over the place and it got kinda confusing. other than that, yeah, keep it coming (hopefully sooner rather than later). i'll be reading it. sere mi eru...lsoa
Top40princess chapter 3 . 11/6/2005
this seems very interesting, keep going please, and update soon!
Little Mermaid chapter 2 . 7/20/2005
o interesting...i wonder what'll happen btw i love how it flashes back and stuff...those are always fun to read

update asap
Dear chapter 2 . 5/9/2005
Finally. Oh, that made me so happy. I love your story, you know, even though it's only like 2 chapters it's still great. You're a wonderful writer. Can't wait for the next part.
lady scribe of avandell chapter 2 . 5/5/2005
ooh! total envisioning of a jim morrison-esque duo (only not quite as totally awesome). and i want to know what's getting started. this is so cool! keep it coming! sere mi eru...lsoa
Phoenyx chapter 2 . 5/4/2005
Very cute. Update it soon. :)
FrozenWaterFaerie chapter 2 . 5/4/2005
I like it a lot. Anyways, are you only putting it in past tense or are you going to have the present thing too?
Dear chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
I like this story alot. I'll glady await the next one, if there is one? Great job so far, I really like it.
lady scribe of avandell chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
ooh! a cool start. if it's a start, that is. it doesn't seem like a one-shot. i like it. the characters seem to have a rich back-story and it makes me want to read more! and i LOVE that you used "help"! it's one of my favorite beatles songs!

i want to read more of this if you've got it! sere mi eru...lsoa
Meliscellaneous chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
this is my kinda story:]its very good so far.
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