I want more! Can't wait unti the next update!

that was good. And dude, update!. I actually like this story, and i think you a good writer so update, keep writing. I want to know what happenes.

I can't wait to see where you take this. The tension, the pain and desire to inflect damage between Halley and Gavin was so raw and powerful. This scene between them was unforgetable. I really loved it. Great work.

Intense chapter - I really felt for Halley. Poor girl. And por Garett too. Both so messed up and both so good at hurting each other with or without help from Gavin.

Fireworks - Halley rocks.

Great chapter

Killer way to end a chapter. So much promise and danger packed into such a small sentence. Four little words spelling disaster and the rollacoster that is life. Great work.

Facinating begining

this is really really great, you should start posting again, it looks like it's been a while. i'd love to see how this all works out. gavin is totally edible, i love him, and i want halley to tell alex to piss off and then live with gavin forever and ever. or if gavin tells alex to piss off and then he and halley live together forever and ever. lol, anyways i'm waiting for more chapters, post soon.

Great story. Keep up the good work and udpate soon.

update! vamos!

oh my golly

i absolutely love this story

please update soon ]

update soon! its been too long

Well...Isn't that a really annoying end to this chapter? And the story hasn't been updated since June! I'm in tears.

I like it though. A few typos but it's great. :)

I really hope you continue with this story. Its been close to half a year, but that doesn't mean anything with a story this good.