|Reviews for Running On Empty|
| this is britt chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Much better than the Bob Seger and the Silver Bullet Band by the same title ;)
| Mischa2k4 chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Oh gosh. I was a great fan of your poetry but I think you've maybe started to believe in your own hype a little. This poem is rubbish and does not compare to your previous work. It doesnt seem to be about anything and is all over the place. Remember, a good poem is a powerful one. This falls very short and I think you should consider what I have said. Don't be offended. Read some of my work and strive to improve. From a greatfan who would like to see you succeed.
| kaiialyne chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Nice...I like how you keep your theme throughout the poem.
| Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
This is very... interesting. I can't think of the right word at the moment, but definitely in a good way. I really like it. Great job on this! ~Karma Chameleon