|Reviews for Little whore|
| Not Quite Dry Eyed chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
wow i really like that i haven't posted for a while which means i haven't read nething of yours in a while this was a good way to bring me back to Fp thanks for sharing hope to hear from you soon keep writing 4 eva and always
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
I love the point you make here. It's very true, but sad. Great work.
| csillan.rose chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
Wow. And how true! Very well written, once again.
| thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Wow, this is actually really good. The rhyming works really well, and the subject... I have to say, I've never thought about it like that before. This is thoughtful and powerful... very good!
| Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
Second stanza seems a little off in the rhyming, but the rest of the poem is really good. I like how you go beyond what everyone thinks a whore really is. Nice work!Hawke
| lambheadluver chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
So true. *Sighs* But a well written poem, I wasn't expecting it to be like that. I thought it was going to be mean, but I still wanted to read it, lol, but I am impressed with the way you wrote it. Nice job, keep writing!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
wow awesome poem.. a totally different view on the siuation and very nicely written.. awesome job
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
So true love. _
I can imagine who wrote this hmm?
Oh and I'm glad I could be of service last night. Hahaha. Hope your 'baby' has a nice life down in hell. _
| thetina chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Great piece of work... it rhymes without being forced, there's lots of emotion and truth.
| charmed-identity chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
When i first saw the title, i thought this is going to be something bad although i was curious to know what was behind that title. But when i read it, you brought up some truth in that poem and i really admire the way you put it into words. it's straightforward and deserves a resonse. I really think you did a great job on the idea and wrote the words clearly. Keep up with that style. i loved it.
| AllyCred chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
OMG...that was amazing i have like no words to describe whats running through my head...all i have to say is like phenomenal and *WOW*...this is just great...i love it...ur an amzing writer and never, ever stop...i loved it. lots of love AllyCred