Reviews for Jacqui's crying
shadowsbehindink chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Omg. This really hit me, because my name is Jacqui. This is amazing. You're a great writer.
Adoryble chapter 1 . 9/24/2005
Hey Kim! I figured I'd brighten someone's day and review! Hehe. Actually, I'm tryin to get out of english hw, but it's the thought that counts, right? I just wanted to say that I think this poem is great b/c of it's imagery - i really like it. And the whole dividing it into "Jacqui's cryin"
yourghost-cyanide-twoshots chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
Bloody hell Kim! Amazing imagery! And the repitition of 'Jaqui crying' adds a nameless something that makes this piece superb. The way you split things up is nice. I do that alot too. However, I've recently tried putting more words in one line and I've decided I like it (as an asthetics thing). Just a suggestion, but it's awesome the way it is. Keep it up!

P.S...New poems and format of organizing 'em. _ Review? Pwez? _

Only if ya have time Kim! _
Goddess Cytherea chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Very tension, emotional, and I can definately feel the sadness and sorrow in it.

P.S. can anyone read my poem and story.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
beautiful
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Wow. Very powerful. Great job on this.
Nameless As Of Now chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Real nice, flows pretty well and has some really cool imagery.
The Sleepy Poet chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
I feel rather sorry for Jacqui. I love how you show little glimpses. I love it...