|Reviews for Being still|
| sheZadey chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
the last line is very different from the 1st two- its like opposites. .. a very interesting poem
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
| Armas Apple chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
Hmm.. interesting, souns like a biger poem, but condenced. Very mysterious.
| Oracular Echo chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Okay, that last review gave you a lot of helpful insight, didn't they? (wink) Okay well, this was an interesting poem, I especially like "diminutive mouse" mainly because of how it flowed within the poem.
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
everyone moves one,—
blind man corner still.
heart decide to rest.
—zoom by bullets past,—
trucks and cars and SUVs,—
homeless on shoulder.
—to the moon & back,—
decode DNA's long strands,—
—jagged mountain peaks,
reflecting in waters clear,—
¿is this what God is?
shreds with 200 mile winds,—
but the eye is still.