Reviews for Being still
sheZadey chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
the last line is very different from the 1st two- its like opposites. .. a very interesting poem
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
Hmm.. interesting, souns like a biger poem, but condenced. Very mysterious.
Oracular Echo chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Okay, that last review gave you a lot of helpful insight, didn't they? (wink) Okay well, this was an interesting poem, I especially like "diminutive mouse" mainly because of how it flowed within the poem.
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
everyone moves one,—


blind man corner still.

—doctors act,—frenzy,

fibrillating electric,—

heart decide to rest.

—zoom by bullets past,—

trucks and cars and SUVs,—

homeless on shoulder.

—to the moon & back,—

decode DNA's long strands,—

misery hungers.

—jagged mountain peaks,

reflecting in waters clear,—

¿is this what God is?

—ripping,—snorting storm,

shreds with 200 mile winds,—

but the eye is still.