Reviews for Second Chances
nEurOtiCdiSOrdEr chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
... second chances apply to basically everything... i like this poem... i like the 'if onlys'... i think everybody wonders like that... thinking back to the things they've done... and say... 'maybe if i'd done that... or done this... it would be different...'

... it sucks not having an undo/redo button isn' it?... heheh... wouldn't that be cool... ur own personal undo/redo button... but then... nothing would be fair anymore... heh... like anything's fair now...

it's like wat my social studies teacher says "If you want something done right, you've got to do it twice."... i think this applies to the poem... heheh... of course he was talking about writing essays but... it still works doesn't it?...
Happiness's Deceit chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Awesome! Great, yet it has a feeling of a person trying to make up to those who are hurt. - Good job on this one, too!
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Oh cool, this is neat as a companion to the other poem. Very nice, 'if only' very effective... I like!