Reviews for My Foolish Habits
Karma Chameleon chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Wow. Amazing. You have some real talent here! I really love the way this was written. The rhythm, the choice of words. It is all really great. Super job on this, I mean, REALLY nice job. Be proud of yourself. ~Karma Chameleon
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Wow... cool. Neat! I'm uninspired for reviews tonight. this is the third time I've written that, for diff ppl. You'll just have to content with the fact that I think this is V/GOOD! And I DO like it lots! Great work!
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
Very dark and acrid- I think you are asking forgiveness from yourself, no?

Stones decay, words lastNick

PS: In a review of a poem by "happy thing", you asked is 'personification' was the right word. I think you would like the word 'anthropomorphism' (I'm sure I've spelt it wrong, but it's a useful word!)
dustytiger chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
this is a great peice, i like how you kept out the habit to add to it, it makes it so much more meaningful to people who don't know you, while still being strong for yourself and the people who know what it is... i'm rabbling aren't i? anyway i think this piece is great, thank you for sharing