Reviews for Darkness
Everlasting-Eyes chapter 1 . 4/7/2005
wow...I can really relate to this poem...it's freaky. This is really good. Everlasting-Eyes
thedarkthatiwas chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Awesome work... I loved this one. Very very cool! neat! And as often, angsty... just the way I like it ;) Very good... the length is fine, it doesn't drag along at all. Good!And, thankee heaps for all the reviews!
Gonzovalies chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Nic Nice and ver Nice piece... I like this kinda of stuff... but yeah i do think you should think on maybe paragraphing your work... makes it more easier to read... but yeah maybe that's your style... I do like reading your stuff though, it's just that the way it's structure makes it seem like it's going on and on forever... As one writer the another you know I don't mean this insultingly I just thought I should add some friendly critiek... anyways keep it up...
Happiness's Deceit chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Makes sense, I guess. It has that kind of jolt that makes you like it! Great Poem!