Reviews for myself
inferno tempest chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
this was great!keep it up!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
::sigh:: something a lot of ppl dont do act like themselves... nice job.. thanks for the review
this is britt chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
very short, but in those few lines, you managed to hit a clear point, when you wake up and look for who you are.
swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
hahaha ur funny...so SHORT but yet so much meaning in itself...nice poem )
Armas Apple chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Peaceful somehow, but sad, for is suggest you are not yourself anymore...Nice, I like it alot.
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
interrestin...very original and short.
MoOkiie chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
this is good. i like how simple but meaningful it is.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
hey, nice haiku. tho i must say, im not too much of a haiku fan cause you dont get too deep into things or much of an idea, u just get the just of it. which can be great. just my personal preference. great haiku tho, and thanls for reviewing me and adding me to favs. was much appriciated and sorry it took so long to review back. super busy, lol
Suz4eva chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
I like this. Luck, love and light to you, -Suzy
sheZadey chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
well that was interesting
Oracular Echo chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Not a traditional haiku but still interesting. This sounds like it is part of a longer poem, whether this be the beginning, ending, refrain, or simply a part in passing. The concept could wield many things.
Macca Lane chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
htis sinteritgn but doenst scan as haiku it is kind of deep hpwever well done keep on wrting my son
Joey7691 chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Um... it doesn't really say much, and it's not really a traditional haiku...they go 5 sylables, 7 sylables, 5 sylables. Just a tip.