Reviews for Night Jewel
Unimportant chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
I love this! *sigh* I suppose I'm still in love with the moon and the stars-especially the stars. Is that a bad thing? Does it mark my immaturity and naivety?


P.S. You were a much better poem writer than I was when I was thirteen (if I did my math right). :)
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Beautiful... simply enough said, but I think you captured the night sky perfectly. I am thouroughly obsessed with the night and the "jewels" it posseses. Great piece. Wonderfully written.
myno chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
beautiful poem- you capture all the serenity and mystery of the night sky.
obsidian katana chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
wow...awesome awesome poem. beautifully written, stunning imagery. simply breathtaking. i love the way you ended this, reemphasizing the theme of mystery, as well as beauty. fantastic work. keep it up.
Adonia Chesser chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
This is a nice, calm poem. With a Beauty.
Eirien chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Truly beautiful. Your imagery is lovely, especially the jewellery inages, and it creates such a rich, mysterious atmsophere. I love the ending "eternal, silent riddles", it poes up the poem to a spiritual dimension, transcends the mere description of beauty. Well done.