Reviews for marionette |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wow...the idea of a marionette is just so adoring...and the imagery is very nice too...very good job... truly yours... |
![]() ![]() ![]() La! You're making me think, hon. It's painfully true, and beautifully written. Danka-gratzi again and again... |
![]() ![]() ![]() powerful. Especially for the first verse- marionette/a pretty little doll/with her blank painted face/and coquettish your stuff:)~laundryshapedsouls |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa. i really like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job with the emotion, verse 3 is great, and really shows the emotion after the first verses. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() a Marionette, very good metorphore to a girl with a broken heart. I like how she got away in the end, poeticlly specking. |