Reviews for Lament
Sworn Destiny chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
Wow.. This is an amazing poem. The imagery and emotion was wonderous, and the way that it jumped from topic to topic without ever losing its flow is something that's hard to achieve in poetry, but you did it extremely well.
BlackLilyArcher chapter 1 . 4/24/2005
...How did I miss this?

TIS SO AWESOME!
izzy chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
wow!...that is an incredible poem! it is definetly full of rage and wrath as he slowly sems to eat her up and leaves her abruptly... in a way, it was also sad, but im proud of ya! its one of the best you have!