Reviews for Give Me
sweetxinsincerity chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
depressing and sad, but still very good :)
LightofShadows chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
Wow, you were right, very gloomy poem. But also very good. I love this part: Oh pleaseGive me deathThe only thing my heart craves forSo that I may finally be at peace;-) keep on writing!
Sat Hari chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
d'accord...a very depressing poem! very good though. the only thing i would change would be the title. instead of just being "give me" i would change it to something more creative or "give me" and then another thing, like "give me laughter" or "give me lust" or something. good job though!