|Reviews for Winter Before the Epilogue|
| Luculent Perspicacity chapter 1 . 5/6/2005
I like the title, it attracted my attention. The imagery is beautifully original.
Third stanza - "shine steamed" and "lubricated" sound off somehow. I like the second line though.
Fifth stanza, etc - great imagery again, and the metaphor of the end of the season/previous day to the relationship/turning point in life is nice, as well as the one of the book.
The line "the hardest thing" seems out-of-place as well somehow.
All in all, I loved this poem. :)
| Crazy-Word-Painter chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
I read this first! -smug- It's really good, I love the imagery and how long it is. It's like a story/poem! And it's so pretty and so DEEP. I truly love it. Your poetry is awesome. Keep up the great work, Panda! :D