Reviews for Cracked Cement
Neried chapter 1 . 8/20/2005
Wow. I love this poemy-thingie!
Sinner By Nature chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
whoa. its a little..ok -alot- disturbing. i mean im not saying it's not nice, otherwise i wasn't gonna finish it to the end and click submit review. oh my god, when i read that part of the veins no offense but yuck yuck yuck! i felt it! i felt it on my arms, i imagined a potato piller pilling of my skin and..oh god. i cant continue. anyway, that was good!my friends loves this kind of ( its poetry right) no? no its not. wutever it is...she likes it. ill tell her to read it.
Inherent chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
PERDY! I want to write that good! Meep. I luff it!