Reviews for Migraines
IdeasInTheAir chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
Wow. I get migranes too, and I couldn't have described it any better.
pneumothorax chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Some of the latter lines could be broken - they seem to long when read.

"malignantly begins to spread." - Interesting line. Almost remensiscent of a disease.
reiphil chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
Nice poem, the ending rhyme scheme is a bith lengthy and flows a bit less then the former, but still a good poem. Descriptions of pain and the ultimate question of why god, if we are his children, would do something to hurt us. Good deeper meaning here.

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Relayer chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
The descriptions are amazing, demonstrates your point clearly
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
very real. migranes do hurt, a lot. i know that, lol! nice poem
ossining chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Wow, sounds painful. Nice job.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
i can relate... great job
Mucho Masturbation chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Returning the favor. :3 I think we can all see where you are coming from one this one. Good concept, well written.