Reviews for That's Life
she smolders chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
This just put a smile on my face. That is life, indeed.
Louellena chapter 1 . 2/11/2006
that abrupt line.. :) well, yuck, but... suits... Lou
pixy-dizzy chapter 1 . 5/11/2005
*eyes tear up because self is so hysterical with laughter* That. Is. Awesome.

And actually quite sad, too, in a way.

I love your poems. The rhythm in this one is erratical, but it adds to the...well, i guess 'flavor' would be the only way to describe it. *scratches head* Although I guess 'atmosphere' could work, too. Congratulations on your marriage, by the way!

Ahem. Anyway, like I said, this is wonderful. The metaphor is really clever. You rock.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 5/8/2005
so beautiful, then as the pigeon shits, your abrupt stop, puts us right there. Well done...you've got a great feel on how to structure and time.
Ivy Thorn chapter 1 . 5/2/2005
Hehe. How cute and unexpected. Very nice.
ChintzyHoyden chapter 1 . 4/26/2005
KICK ASS!
Dahlia Wolffe chapter 1 . 4/15/2005
lol. I liked it. Yeah, that's life. I bombed a math final today. Not even a full 40%. But it was precalculus, so who can blame me? I'm only 17 and I barely understand- writers don't do math, after all, they write! Well, this poem was much enjoyed. But I would probably have killed the bird.-Yin
Autumnymph chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
haha, very true
Post Apocalyptic chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
hahah thats a very cute twist, I was like...aww pretty birdys...oh...nevermind... nice poem, funny.

Alice
Saiai chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
LOL! Yes, that is life and you've captured it in it's truest form. Bravo.
Siberia82 chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
Oh my, that was hilarious! It started off so beautifully, and then the harshness of reality just dropped on our heads (pun intended) so unexpectedly! You should categorize this poem under "Humor"! Two thumbs up. b_d
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
humorous and true at the same time. nice!
ossining chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
LOL, that was great. I loved it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
awesome
tofujunky chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
Tee-hee-hee . . .

"Life hits you on the head at unexpected moments."

Very clever.