Reviews for Lupe
Cheyenne Kai chapter 3 . 6/22/2005
Last paragraph: "The pups squeaked in sudden arousing as their mother came" change 'arousing' to 'arousal'

It's a good chapter to get to know the characters better.
Cheyenne Kai chapter 2 . 6/22/2005
7th paragraph: "The only she had eaten since the snowshoe hare were the placentas delivered alongside her pups" you missed out 'thing' between 'only' and 'she'

"One of the pups now finished its lengthy drink of the wolf’s rich milk" maybe put 'had' between 'pups' and 'now'

Again, a good chapter and well written.
shadowedstar213 chapter 6 . 5/10/2005
wow, this is great!
Nightwolf 006 chapter 6 . 5/9/2005
Wow what a wonderful chapter say if you ever need another character of two just let me know cause I have a whole bunch of them in my head here so please continue
Cheyenne Kai chapter 1 . 5/4/2005
I know a lot of people have already saiad this, but they are wonderful descriptions. Loved the characterisation and presentation of the wolf.
Infection chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
this was amazing, great write.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 6 . 4/16/2005
okay- chap 7?Wolves-do they really kill a rivals pups? There are two wolves kept on a nearby county farm preserve- they are both black and beautiful. Not as big as you'd expect, however. I once saw a show where the wolves had surrounded a baby deer- then the deer stood still and wouldn't move- it confused the wolves so much that the deer ended up escaping on a technicality- the wolves apparently needed something to move in order to kill it-something to do with carnivores instinct. I guess they weren't to hungry at the time.
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 5 . 4/11/2005
Aw :) Love the detail, and now the plot has a foreshadow of things to come. 6?
Nightwolf 006 chapter 4 . 3/24/2005
Aw that was so cute and so sad I feel sorry for Tamaline, having to hide away from the alpha male and protecting her pups at the same time, I hope nothing happens to her. Lupes blind? Or just because he's a pup? Well continue soon I want to know what happens and check out my stories

*Pipsy*
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 4 . 3/22/2005
Well, first time I shed some tears on this site! Great writing. Chap 5?
Nightwolf 006 chapter 3 . 3/21/2005
Hey wolves I like the wolves stories please continue I'm hoping for more bye

*Pipsy*
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 3 . 3/21/2005
That was pretty exciting:) Chap. 4?
Dr. Frank Was Right chapter 3 . 3/21/2005
Another great chapter
THROUGHTHESEEYES chapter 2 . 3/20/2005
I like the human side you gave interest story. Chap 3?
Dr. Frank Was Right chapter 2 . 3/20/2005
Wow! You are such a talented writer this is great, keep up the good work!

Regards

Milo
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