Reviews for Sex Slaves Can Love too |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was awful. Learn to write. : |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! this is SUCH a catchy beginning, n thx 4 u're revies;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i agree with inkblood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... Cute...~Kara |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! cuteness. SP |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg. this is sucha great your style of writing isto include the sex scenes and it seems to be your strong point so i think you should keep up writing the way you do! just have fun with your writing and let us enjoy it and oh yeah dont even worry if it is too much sex because thats wat it is rated M for! goodbhye for now |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow... that sucked. You used "proper" English for some parts, and then used slang for others. Your story line isn't very good either. The spelling mistakes made it hard to understand. |
![]() ![]() ![]() did u know ur not supposed to have author's notes as seperate chapters? it's in the rules, hun. be careful with this because not everyone is as "nice" as me. someone can report you. i know that from personal exzperience. _ continue soon! i want like a million posts a week! just kidding. um maybe one or two or three. something reasonable for you. SP |
![]() ![]() ![]() I still can't get over it when you read it at school to me! HA HA HA! I'm so immature! Update soon, crackhead! Au revoir! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i luv this story! _ SP |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, isn't that a bit too sudden? |
![]() ![]() ![]() She's really happy ain't she. Write more, k! Au revoir! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter. uh, "wow," is all i can say. . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chapter! SP |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh heh heh. Ka-boom.(Sorry, I was watching "Who's Line.") Update soon! I know you just posted this, but still! Au revoir! |