why havent you updated..? plz update, i hate it when writers dont complete their story specially when the story is that good..!

Okay, this was REALLY good and if you don't keep going with this story I'll...hurt you. :)

bec

Are you ever going to update this story?

Please update!

I want to know what happens with Torreal and Caelia? are they going to end up together?

please update!

eep. i a jerk. a big one at that too. i'm sorry i never reviewed earlier, even when i got the chance. . . it's just that senior year sucks the life out of you :(

update soon girlie. i need to read this again since i've forgotten most of it. but you know what i still remember. . . i heart heart heart torreal. nyaah, he's all mine. and yessh, sister erm tianna should die. . . i don't like her. uh-un. not one bit. pssh, she's not supposed to be with torreal. . . it defeats the purposed of erm caelie and torreal ever being together. lol, i'm being stupid. i tell you, it's the whole senior year thing. your brain turns to mush and before you know it, it's dripping out of your ears.

anyhoo, awesome work with this. update soon, darling. take care and hope you're doing quite well

-bubbl3gum

I really like the characters you've introduced, especially Caelia. I like that she's sarcastic and has a sense of humor; it makes her more entertaining to read about. I also like Daerion - he fits the part of the adorable little brother very well. Anyhow, I enjoyed this chapter very much and I'm looking forward to the next one! I'll be back to read the rest of the story soon.

Nice introduction. The description at the beginning really gives you a picture in your head of what's going on. The girl seems like she'll be an interesting character, and so I'm looking forward to what happens to her next. I like this so far; I'm off to read the rest now!

I do the same thing...Often...I've decided that from now on, I'm not posting any stories that aren't finished...that way I can update regularly...And frequently...And I don't have to keep making up excuses...I think I've kinda run out of any believable excuses...

Oh gawd...I only have one more chapter before I have to wait for an update...Oh jeez...I can't say any more...I have to keep reading...

Don't you just hate having to write the backstory chapters? Yours at least turn out well...Mine are absolutly horrid...Like nothing you've ever seen...They're dreary and boring and dull...They'd put a history teacher to sleep...If you know what I mean...Anyway, I already told about my patience...Or lack thereof...Onto the next chapter...

Out of curiosity, if it's an old author's note, why not just replace it with the next chapter? Does it actually serve a purpose? Or is it one of those things, a reminder at the end of things that happened along the journey that is writing?

I must admit...I didn't see that one coming...How delightfully unexpected...Hm...Alright...no speculations for now...I haven't the patience to keep writing when there are more chapters to be read...

He courted her or was engaged to her or whatever for that long? That seems like an awfully long time...Apparently she wasn't as good at getting rid of him as with the other suitors...

Hm...arrogant prince...big dinner...evil father...Hm...What could possibly happen next? Heh heh...Thankfully, I still have a couple chapters to read...I love that...

Darrion's adorable...and how come obvious things never occur to the main characters? Like the fact that as the second oldest, she would probably be married before her sister? Why is it they never realize these kinds of things?

Truthfully, it was actually very good...I know everyone tends to say that but the way you described the scene was amazing...The way you talk about things differently...Instead of her hand just trailing in the water, it first leaves the warmth of her body...Things like that...Just know that it doesn't go unappreciated...