|Reviews for Caelia|
| dark-rosette chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
are u ever going to update?. ur summary was interesting. and now u wont even update!
| The Moon Child chapter 9 . 1/5/2006
*sighs contently* Now that was a good chapter. Teehee...I love Rain and Wolf! Although...Wolf is a bit too...touchy...for my liking. So Rain! *glomps Rain*- *chants* Update! Update! Update!
| The Moon Child chapter 1 . 1/5/2006
Wow...what a moving chapter. All the flashback and memories...so sad... You really are a talented writer. I'm going to continue the story now...no more reviewing until the last chapter unfortunately, as I always seem to do when I'm not supposed to be reading...(my parents think i'm studying P)
| Salt and Vinegar Pringles chapter 9 . 12/16/2005
Yay, I love the updates! This was excellent, I love this new introduction of Wood Folk... Are we going to hear Tianna's tale of what happens with the Gryphon's next? And who're the other men! IT'S SO EXCITING!
| Ciao.Bella.Soldato chapter 9 . 12/10/2005
Lol, I finally got enough time to review this chapter.
It seems Torreal cares about Caelia, to some degree anyways. This chapter feels kinda short, and nothing really happened. Ah, well, you did say that you got bored with this story. It happens all the time. Well, I hope you either find new inspiration for this story, or new inspiration for a NEW story!
| ice flyer chapter 3 . 12/8/2005
hey! sorry I haven't reviewed in ages. i still like this a lot. caelia is very amusing and i like the description of "the Torreal Triumph." just a little suggestion that stuck out: Jaiv and Ria seem all too "Mary-Sue" ish, if a guy can be a Mary-Sue. Just, too perfect, if you know what I mean. Anyways, good job, I like your style :)
| Evan-Cora chapter 9 . 12/7/2005
Wow... finaly, i was gonna give up on you
| Undecided.And.Confused chapter 9 . 12/3/2005
Wow sounds exiting. Some magical beings are being brought in. Update soon.
| KaronePrincess chapter 9 . 11/30/2005
Hey Angelbmo, it's me KaronePrincess.
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Caelia is so funny. I like her strong-mind indepndent character a lot!
I kind of felt all the pains the she had.
I LAUGHED at the part when "She was quickly calculating an escape plan in her mind as he walked ever closer. Hit him in the ankle, causing him to fall and then scramble away. It was a bit faulty but it was the best she could come up with on such a short notice. Ready. One . . . Two . . ." She is so independent. That's proved her a strong and brave character. I really like her.
I'm glad that Rain and and Wolf are nice people. They are Wood Folk people. And I'm glad that they found the prince-Torreal, Caelia, and the maid-Laire. By the way Laire is a really nice girl. I like her a lot, too. SHe is clever. She didn't know the surrounded people are nice people, so she said that she will protect Caelia and will put her life on the line. She is very clever and quite brave.
I laughed at the part when Laire said, "Oh no no no no no, you get away from me" that..was so FUNNY.
Wolf seems to take an interest in her.
Torreal was surprised to see Caelia. But he put a mask on his pretending to be normal.
What happen to Tianna? She got kindnapped by gryphons...poor...her!
So now they go to Quecertum.
Please update more! I really LOVE the story.
Caelia and Torreal had a hard time, uh?
| Lady of romance world88 chapter 9 . 11/29/2005
Um...why does Prince choose Tianna over Caelia? I thought Prince like Caelia. Why does her father never let her meet Prince when he come over to see her? Anyway hurry update soon.
| belle amia chapter 9 . 11/29/2005
where to start, where to start...well i must say that i liked the torreal you wrote in the first draft of this story...this torreal jus bugs the heck outta me...HARRY POTTER IS AMAZING...furthermore, i think that rain and laire are very weird names but they work for this, there are a few tense problems, and there's a word u forgot to delete in a sentence (i re-read the sentence and you jus forgot to delete the word from an incomplete thought)...HARRY POTTER IS AMAZING...i like rain and i like how your determined to finish the story...but you need to stop dwelling on scenes that right now seem small to me and get on with the plot so that you can finish this story that your bored with...HARRY POTTER IS AMAZING...and i like the ending where they walk into the woods in search of the village whose name i can't pronounce...HARRY POTTER IS AMAZING!
luv ya cuz!
| Deliah Minicet chapter 9 . 11/28/2005
good update :) the only thing was I was a little confused with the line: "Caelia's eyes widened and she pushed TORREAL hard against the chest, causing him to topple over and let go of her dress." Did you really mean Rain there? anyways, can't wait to read more!
| aznqt09 chapter 5 . 11/28/2005
I just read your story it's great!Update soon! Also you said Caelia pushed Torreal off when it was Rain and she didn't know his name yet. What happens to Caelias brothers and sister and brothers wife? Please don't get bored of this story again and not update in a long time.
| messy chapter 9 . 11/28/2005
i want more!
| KaronePrincess chapter 9 . 11/28/2005
You finally updated! You don't know how long it is for me to wait for the next chapter.
I just want you to know that I really REALLY GLAD that you are still CONTINUE with this story. It's truly a GREAT, COMEDY, and ACTION story that I ever read. I truly LOVE this story so much!
Thanks! And now I off to read this chapter and will leave you comments. :lol!