Reviews for Caelia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hm...respect the king..well keep updating girl...so loving it..well anways can't wait for the next chapter soon..well anyways gotta go now..peace out then... |
![]() ![]() ![]() love the story...write more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, please, please, please, and PLEASE continue UPDATE the story. This is MADE me LAUGH HARD...ha. Gosh...I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY! I really LOVE the PART the he and her have a fight or arguing. I really LOVE the COMEDY story. And this is the ONE! I'm serious! Good writing. It's humor! Please let them continue fight each other! Love the story! Great JOb! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i really like this now. i like the plot and the characters and her voice and everything. your writing is very very good..i don't often compliment like this :) great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is very good. your writing flows very well and you use beautiful vocabulary without effort. just one thing.."She closed her eyes, resulting in another tear running down her fragile cheeks." It should be "She closed her eyes, causing another tear to run down her fragile cheek." anyway, great job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh! Action! Didn't expect you to go this way at all, although it certainly will be interesting and probably better :) Very original...keep up the good work! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() good job...keep goin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well r u happy now? im finally reviewin...lol...well, it's really good and im glad u took my advice are gonna finish it! luv ya kid! |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE NOW! I AM SO BORED ON THIS COMPUTER OF MINE AND I NEED INSPIRATION! PLEASE UPDATE! I IS A BEGGINGS YOU! |
![]() ![]() keep going i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE your story and hope to see more chapters soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool story! update soon :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey!Cool!I gladly Torreal came rescue Caelia and her sister. Can I ask you a question? Why does Caelia came with Tianna in the carriage to meet Torreal? Poor Tianna. I wonder how will Torreal feals about this bethroded to Tianna? Hurry update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOu're awesome! GO man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story. Very good. I read it all 7chapters straight. You better update soon. |