|Reviews for Caelia|
| Nerdette chapter 3 . 4/6/2005
I love the in depth description, very vivid imagery. Can't wait till the story plot unfolds, update soon!
| bulletproof.cupid chapter 3 . 4/6/2005
Nice, I see some good conflict about to come *rubs hands maliciously* This is certainly going to be good. You know what, if he was 'engaged' to Tianna but falls in love with Caelia... that would be great lol. Sorry, I just keep rammbling on ;o) but it's just an idea. Wait, scratch that, I want to see how this turns out without my weird thoughts coming in lol.
Are you freaking psychic? I updated too and you do as well lol. Yeah, definitely a funny coincidence!
Hmm I loved this: “There’s your bread, darlingest daddykins,” Aww his vein throbbing in his head... may be it'll burst some day *smiles innocently* Love it so far. I can sense some great things coming on - but what was that dinner about woman? Avoided it P At least she has her brother there to protect her lol. That's how all older brothers are in a way. Update soon! Can't wait for more. L8er,
PS. Thanks for reviewing my stuff. I really appreciate it D
| ktbelle1022 chapter 3 . 4/6/2005
hey this again is really good...i cant wait to see wut happens to caelia in the next chapter... her not so charming prince i think is gonna turn things around!
| unerasable words chapter 2 . 4/5/2005
Oh gosh. I didn't review this chapter! So sorry. But anyway! I'm waiting for all the romantic fluffiness to come in! :) Roar, I could just strangle the father! So annoying. But update soon!
| bulletproof.cupid chapter 2 . 4/4/2005
Wow, I'm speachless. The description at the beginning was awesome. It was so easy on the imagination - I cound view a whole different world in my mind. You're wonderful!
Hmm she didn't keep one other option in mind: her! Someone her dad wants her to get engaged too or meet. Either way, it's a bad bad thing :( Oh or may be he could turn out to be a nice, loving, gentle soul... lol I think I over did it. Well, let's see.. maybe it'll help her get over the sadness that's within her.
GOod luck with this and update soon. It has a lot of potential,
| recreated chapter 2 . 3/24/2005
yay! you updated! This is such a cute story. i love it. It sort of reminds me of Ella Enchanted, which is a really good book, but I like this story better. I love the Brother/Sister relationship they have, I think i should be that nice to my sibs. too huh? haha. Well, gah. I hate her dad already and I haven't actually met him yet. bof. Um, What's the dinner for? Is pops getting married again or is Caelia going to be engaged? O, I'm exicted for more! Great work!
| Deliah Minicet chapter 2 . 3/23/2005
Very nice so far; your prologue had some very beautiful, eloquent descriptions. :) I am already anticipating the introduction of her love interest...it will be intersting to see what he is like :)
| recreated chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
awe man! poor thing! Wow. I could picture everything you wrote, great imagery. I feel really awful for her though, that her mom died. ((frowns)) I don't know, I always get sad thinking about family deaths. heehe. Well, can't wait for more! This is really really good. I hope to see more soon! ((goes to log in and put you on alerts))
Oo! Thanks for reviewing my story! ha.
| ktbelle1022 chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
so far its really good brenn. keep writing just the way you are and it'll be even better. you have a very good prologue that hooks the reader and gives them the curiosity to finish it. keep up the good work!
| gonenehehe chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
It wasn't bad at all, it was very good for one of you first stories... if you need any help, feel free to email me,
| unerasable words chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
I'm not one to give out harsh critism because I thought this beginning was very well done! :) Keep updating will you please?