Reviews for Moving On
deletion chapter 1 . 3/25/2005
very moving in a wayit gives power off of a few simple words that hits our hearts...
Bri Evvans chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
Beautiful. Perfict use of mechanics. This is what poetry is all about.
this is britt chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
very powerful and sad. I like your pen name, by the way. thanks for the review!
arcane devices chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
this was very heartfelt and I hope your friend will eventually "move on". -ADD
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
wow... very sad and awesome
Emily Parker chapter 1 . 3/19/2005
That's good. Very descriptive, and tear-jerking. And I'm sorry about your friends loss. This is very good.