| Reviews for Moving On |
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   deletion chapter 1 . 3/25/2005 very moving in a wayit gives power off of a few simple words that hits our hearts... |
| Bri Evvans chapter 1 . 3/21/2005 Beautiful. Perfict use of mechanics. This is what poetry is all about. |
| this is britt chapter 1 . 3/20/2005 very powerful and sad. I like your pen name, by the way. thanks for the review! |
| arcane devices chapter 1 . 3/20/2005 this was very heartfelt and I hope your friend will eventually "move on". -ADD |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 3/19/2005 wow... very sad and awesome |
| Emily Parker chapter 1 . 3/19/2005 That's good. Very descriptive, and tear-jerking. And I'm sorry about your friends loss. This is very good. |