|Reviews for Request Stop|
| this is britt chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
feels pungent and bittersweet, the notion. good work again.
| katmufla chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
this was great. you have a knack for getting emotion on paper...or screen. anyway, the line "and shaking with fear"...you could probably take out that and, maybe substitute it with a "while" or something similar. i happen to have a profound love of the word "and", so reviewers have pointed out. but you're definitely better than me...i'm just an "and" slut. but this was great work...i really liked it. keep it up!