Reviews for Clash
dfghjklcvbnmm chapter 3 . 9/24/2010
I like this it's got a different story line which is cool :)
bubublacz chapter 13 . 1/1/2010
Well, that was indeed-ly short. I have to say that the plot sounds nice but I didn't really liked the way you write. It was a bit too rushed for me.

Also, I would just like to voice out my great dislike for the Mom and Madison combo. The mom should know that it was her daughter's fault and that she had to own up to it. The drama between Stella and her mom was great just that Stella just passively accepted it which was a tad bit weird.

And also, the romance between Matt and Stella wasn't greatly stressed out whenever they have conversations it mostly consisted of one-liner sentences. I actually didn't feel the chemistry kind of more of an awkward relationship.

Once again, I liked your plot, it was intriguing.
bubublacz chapter 6 . 1/1/2010
I don't like the Mom. She has a weird sense of second chances that or she's blinded by her favoritism to her other daughter.
bubublacz chapter 5 . 1/1/2010
This sounds good.
abbsi chapter 13 . 9/30/2009
Aww! I love this story. I love how she comes to realize what motherhood really is and how she's been Abbey's mom all along. I was annoyed at Madison and the mother at first, but Stella says it all when she says she loves Abbey more than her own mother loves her. Maybe that's not true, but it makes it obvious that she should get custody of "her" daughter. :) And I really liked how you ended the story with the custody papers, and the epilogue was about the birth of another child (this one biologically Stella's), though this centers the story more around motherhood than romantic relationships. I don't know if this was intentional, but I thought it fit the story line very well. Besides, spousal love is awesome, but there is nothing like the love for a child. ;)
sarcasm is my middle name chapter 13 . 3/14/2009
wow, that was a great story!

I loved the epilogue...
palmsaresweaty chapter 10 . 7/16/2008
i think christian should take the baby. Its still selfish for mom and madison to do that to stella no matter how much she thinks she likes it.
anonymous chapter 13 . 9/21/2007
Hey! Your story idea is pretty original, but it seems as if Stella is completely static...

I didn't really understand why she didn't just say no to her sister, and how in trying to be more "fair" to her, her sister and her mom end up just giving her permanent responsibility of the baby. I think mostly it may have been fact that Stella is like a lump who can't stand up for herself to her at, most 17 year old sister, and that Madison is "smart," yet acts so stupid all the time. This is a valiant effort, but it falls short on character development and the logistics of having a baby.
Lorenz S chapter 1 . 9/4/2007
One of the best ones I've ever read.
freelancewriter chapter 13 . 3/4/2007
wandless chapter 13 . 2/28/2007
Cool story!
siddika chapter 13 . 2/20/2007
Absolutely fabulous.
woesoflove chapter 1 . 1/21/2007
Hey. This story has a great plot and i enjoyed it in the beginning, but I have to say that I expected a bit more depth in the character's emotions and the occurences. It seemed a bit sudden the way Matt and Stella just fell in love, and it was kind of unrealistic that Stella was so completely attached to Abbey without us seeing more into her thoughts. I think that the plot had a lot more potential and it could have been a lot better. Sorry if it seems like I'm flaming or anything, this is just my personal opinion.
HannahMarieWillow chapter 3 . 10/8/2006
I like this story. Yeh, poor Stella, having to pretend the baby was hers. I know I wouldn't.
RedBerries chapter 13 . 8/17/2006
I'm not sure that you did Stella justice in this story. Or Abbey either. Obviously the one thing that makes Stella different is that she has Abbey, which makes Abbey quite important in her own right. But to be honest, I don't think you gave Abbey enough importance. If she was a slightly older baby, then the lack of screaming, crying, and frequent nappy changes and feeding could be explained...but if she was new born, or even a couple of months old, then there so many more complications that you didn't really consider. I think you didn't really consider the practicalites and realities of having a new born baby. I know this is getting a bit flamish, and I'm sorry, but I just wanted to give you an honest opinion.
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