|Reviews for Once Upon a Time|
| Destiny Xavior chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
This is kinda weird but it's cool. Love reading your work.
| Cadience Gemma Topaz chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
I like, but im slightly confuesd, oh well its still pretty good
| grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 3/22/2005
Well, I certainly thought that a good story with a happy ending. The way you raised and lowered the tone during the poem was very well done and the pace was just right. Something quite charming about it too. Nice one.
| Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 3/21/2005
Interesting little piece. Sort of a thinking piece. Its like when you dont have your morals in check and start becoming too suspicious, life backs itself over you and you get smooshed. I liked this little parable sort of poem. It had the right amount of humor. Great job.
| LauraKM chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Brilliant, love it, i've tried a few things along similar lines, but i like yours more. very clever and funny, made me smile.
| TheAngelofhope chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Hehe, funny. It was good, nice job. :)
| TrueToMyself chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Um...interesting? Kind of unexpected ending caught me by surprise (as it probably was supposed to do...). Keep writing!