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![]() ![]() ![]() To tell ya the truth, i don't really get it, not that it matters, lotsa others prolly do. Like I sed b4, keep up your excellent work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice work... even though the last stanza doesn't really fit in, it kindof summarizes the poem which is nice. Just a spelling error I noticed.. in the first two stanzas you often wrote "the" instead of "they." Good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the last two parts. Very well written. |
![]() ![]() I like the first five stanzas. The sixth is alright; just doesn't fall in. My opinion, which shouldn't matter to you. But very good nonetheless. |