Reviews for Lies
fangsdaevil chapter 1 . 5/27/2005
To tell ya the truth, i don't really get it, not that it matters, lotsa others prolly do. Like I sed b4, keep up your excellent work.
Brightstarr-Bella chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Nice work... even though the last stanza doesn't really fit in, it kindof summarizes the poem which is nice. Just a spelling error I noticed.. in the first two stanzas you often wrote "the" instead of "they." Good work
HuRt-AnD-Al0nE chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
I really like the last two parts. Very well written.
arkesn chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
I like the first five stanzas. The sixth is alright; just doesn't fall in. My opinion, which shouldn't matter to you.

But very good nonetheless.