I wished you had taken a difference approach to this idea and written something not so flat out telling.

Oo Dude thats exactly how I feel...But in a little diffrent form of the concept of Fate. You mind E-mailing meh at ASAP? I need help with somethin I'm writing...I was wonderin if you could give me tips Please and thankyou

Quite a nice piece. :) This is one of the better poems I've read.

All too true

Wow, your summary says you do not usually post your poetry, and I am wondering why! This poem was powerful and flowed beautifully! I loved this!R/R my stuff if you'd like to

wow! i really like this poem. i especially like the line "one truth between lies." well done! u said that u don't usually post poetry, buh i think u should, cuz ur really good at it! keep up the good work.

P.S. plz R&R sum of my work as well if u've got time. thx!